I was watching TV today (I do that a lot). It was a program about a do-it-yourself bathroom renovation disaster, one of those shows where an expert arrives just in time to help the hapless homeowner.
The homeowner (let’s call him Dave) had started to renovate his basement bathroom, which included a laundry. First he put in a new washer and dryer. Then he put in the trap for the toilet (the opening in the floor for the toilet). Next, he wanted to put a wall between the toilet and the washer and dryer. That’s where Dave’s project had stalled.
I watched as the expert looked at the trap, then at the washer and dryer. Then he turned to Dave and asked, “How far from the wall should the toilet be?”
Dave paused. “Maybe about two and a half feet?”
“That’s right,” the expert said, as he measured the distance to the washer and dryer. “Unfortunately, that’ll put your new wall about a foot from your washer and dryer. You won’t have any room to do your laundry.” Silence. “I get the feeling you didn’t make a plan here,” the expert said.
“Not at all,” said our helpless homeowner.
“Well,” replied the expert, “You’ve got to have a plan. If you don’t know where you’re ending up you won’t have an idea how to get there.”
Simple, right? You might even be saying, “How dumb is this guy? He went ahead without even thinking.”
You can’t do that with your college admissions essay.
You need to have a plan before you start writing. Make an outline. Know where you’re starting with your college essay, where you’re heading, and where you want to end up. Spend time thinking about your conclusion. (Don’t forget it’s the last thing your college admissions reader sees.) What will you say you experienced or learned? What will the admissions reader learn about you? Do all that before you start typing.
If you don’t know where you’re ending up you won’t have an idea how to get there.
You can go back later to add details, rearrange sentences (even paragraphs if necessary), and edit until you’re satisfied. But first build your structure.
Take it from our hapless homeowner. Make a plan. Otherwise you may not have any room to do your laundry.
For more help outlining and organizing your college admissions essay, read my previous post “Organizing Your Thoughts.”