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4 Ways to Know if You’ve Written a Good College Essay

4 Ways to Know if You've Written a Good College Application EssayHow do you know if you’ve written a good college admissions essay?

Do you just cross your fingers, hope for the best, and upload?

Wait! Before you hit that send button —

Here are 4 ways to check if you’ve written a good college essay:

1. Put the essay away for a day or two. Then read it again.

Reading your essay with fresh eyes will help you be more objective about your writing.

Make sure:

  • The essay flows well from one paragraph to the other.
  • It holds your interest from beginning to end.
  • It says positive things about you.
  • You’ve answered all parts of the question.
  • You still like it.

2. Read your essay out loud.

  • You shouldn’t stumble over words or phrases when you read your essay out loud.
  • If you do stumble, look at your sentence structure and word choices, and revise the bumpy places.
  • Read your essay out loud again to double-check it’s okay.

3. Ask yourself if your essay says everything you want it to say about you.

  •  Make a list of the important points you want the colleges to know about you when they’ve finished reading your essay. (For example: “I’m thoughtful and creative, and would go out of my way for a friend.”) Then go through your essay slowly and carefully and make sure those ideas are included. If they’re not, find a way to incorporate them.
  • Sometimes an idea that you think is clear is actually not clear to the reader. This can be tricky for writers, because sometimes we’re so close to what we’ve written that it’s hard to tell. So make your list of important points and ask one or two adults to read your essay. Ask them whether or not they learned those things from your essay. If they didn’t, go back and clarify those ideas.

4. Pretend you’re a college reader.

For the next few minutes we’re going to give you a promotion. You’re a college admissions officer named Jordan. Jordan doesn’t know you. Jordan has already read 50 essays today, and some of them have been really boring.

Here is what you have to ask yourself:

  • Will my introduction capture Jordan’s attention?
  • Did I find an interesting way to tell my story, or has Jordan heard it the same way a hundred times? (“I’m so glad I won the big game.”)
  • Is this a story only I can write?
  • Does my personality jump off the page?
  • Did I include interesting details?
  • Does it say good things about me?
  • What will Jordan know about me after reading my essay? How would Jordan describe me?
  • Will Jordan think that I would be a good member of the college community?

Jordan’s got a lot to think about and so do you. So before you hit that send button, take time to re-read your essay, make sure it says what you want it to say, and put yourself in your college reader’s shoes. 

And then you can hit upload.

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Sharon Epstein is owner of First Impressions College Consulting in Redding, Connecticut. A Writers Guild Award-winner and two-time Emmy nominee, Sharon teaches students how to write memorable college application essays, write outstanding resumes, and master interview skills. She works with students everywhere: in-person, by phone, Skype and email. Visit her website for more information and connect on Google+, Pinterest and Twitter.


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Choosing the Right Words for Your Resume

Job vs. Work?

Experience vs. Skills?

How do you choose the best words to use on your resume?

Grammar checker Grammarly looked at 500 job postings, and then examined the language those companies used to express their hiring priorities. What did they learn?

The words that companies use in their job listings can convey the companies’ values and the type of employee they’re looking for.

Knowing that can be a big plus when you’re crafting your resume and cover letter.

Take a look at the infographic. You may find your resume is ready for an update.

Watch Your Words in the Job Search!

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Why Am I Failing My Job Interview? Five Reasons.

why a I failing my job interviewYou walk into an interview. You sit down, discuss the job, and think it goes well. Excited, you wait for a call that doesn’t come. Weeks later, you’re still waiting. What are you doing wrong?

The problem may be your presentation, your preparation, or both.

Here are Five Ways You May Be Failing Your Interview:  

1. You Blew it in Less Than a Minute.

Studies show that you’ve got less than ten seconds to make a good impression. Think about what that means: Before you say a word, the interviewer is sizing you up and beginning to decide whether you’d be a good fit for the company.

Be on time. Being late can make you a non-starter.

Dress appropriately. If you don’t know the dress code at the company, dress up.

Body language counts. A lot. Stand up when the interviewer enters the room. Smile and be the first one to offer a handshake. If you’re already standing up, take a confident step forward as you hold out your hand.

Greet the interviewer by name. (“It’s good to meet you, Mrs. Smith. Thank you for taking the time to meet me.”) Most companies will tell you the name of your interviewer, or you can call and ask. Look up your interviewer on LinkedIn so you’ve got some background.

Your job interview begins before you say hello. Use those first seconds to your advantage and set a positive tone.

2. You Didn’t Focus on What the Interviewer Needs.

Job interviews aren’t about what the company can do for you; they’re about what you can do for the company. When you’re asked “Why do you want to work here,” be prepared to give examples.

Do your homework. Spend several hours or even an entire day researching the company. At the least, you will be expected to know the requirements of the job you’re applying for and how your skills will mesh.

Take your research a step further and find a way your skills can be of value that the interviewer hasn’t considered. For instance, a job opening might not mention language skills, but a bilingual candidate who discovers the company has a growing segment of Spanish-speaking customers, and then mentions that he or she can use those skills to help improve service to the Spanish-speaking population, might rate some serious attention.

Bottom line: If you don’t know what you’re talking about when it comes to the company, you can show yourself the door.

3. You Didn’t Listen.

During the interview, listen carefully to what the interviewer tells you about the company. This is another way to discover how your skills might mesh with the company’s needs.

4. You Skipped Practice.

Unless you’re skilled at interviewing, you should practice before you get there.

Get comfortable answering the question “Tell me about yourself.” (This is your elevator pitch.)

Make a list of other practice questions. The possibilities are too numerous to list, but categories of questions you might be asked include your qualifications, your future, your ability to work with others, how you have/will handle challenging situations, and how you problem solve.

Don’t memorize your answers—that’s a big mistake. Memorizing only makes your answers dry and robotic. Instead, become comfortable with what you have to say and with the examples you have to draw on.

Don’t lie. Interviewers can often tell, and even if they can’t, lies can trip you up later.

5. You Didn’t Stand Out.

Standing out doesn’t have to be an elusive task. I’ve already covered four ways to stand out:

  • Know about the company want to work for.
  • Understand how your skills match the job.
  • Listen to the interviewer.
  • Focus on the company’s needs.

Add a “wow” factor. Find a way to show you went that extra step to be prepared.

  • Bring a sharp-looking portfolio or resume.
  • If your interviewer wants to know if you’d be willing to learn additional skills, don’t hesitate—accept the opportunity.
  • Sometimes all it takes is being positive and relaxed in your interview. If the interviewer enjoys the conversation and feels like you’d fit in well at the company, that might just be enough of a “wow.”
  • When you leave, acknowledge the interviewer’s time. Most of all, tell him or her that you enjoyed being there. Your interviewer will remember you.

If you’re eager to land that job, then do your homework, set a positive tone, and understand how you can satisfy the needs of the company you want to work for. Then add a little “wow.” Your next job interview may just be the one that gets you in the door.

sharon-epstein-college-essay-writing-and-interview-skillsSharon Epstein is a Writers Guild Award-winner and two-time Emmy Award nominee, teaching students around the world how to master interview skills, write resumes, and transform their goals, dreams and experiences into memorable college application essays. She works with students everywhere: in-person, by phone, FaceTime, Skype and email. Visit my website for more info. Connect on Google+, Pinterest and Twitter.

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Win a Free College Essay Counseling Session

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Join me on April 30 and you could win a free 45 college essay counseling session!

I’ll be leading a college application essay writing workshop on Wednesday, April 30 at 7pm at Pro Access, Bethel’s Teen Center, in Bethel Connecticut. And  I’ll be giving away one free 45 minute session.

During the program you will:

  • Find out what colleges look for in an application essay
  • Find out how to choose a good essay topic
  • Learn easy writing techniques that will help you capture your reader’s attention and make your essay interesting to read.

Then we will read actual college essays and discuss why they did and did not work.

Location: Pro Access, 1 School Street, Bethel, CT  (located in the back of the Municipal Center)
Fee: Free for Bethel residents; non-residents $10
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Necessary to: Hilda DeLucia at hilda@bethelproaccess.org or 203-482-1732

This program is perfect for high school sophomores and juniors and their families. I hope to see you on April 30!

sharon-epstein-college-essay-writing-and-interview-skillsSharon Epstein is owner of First Impressions College Consulting. A Writers Guild Award-winner and two-time Emmy Award nominee, Sharon teaches students how to master interview skills, write killer resumes, and transform their goals, dreams and experiences into memorable college application essays. I work with students everywhere: in-person, by phone, Skype and email. Visit my website for more information. Connect on Google+, Pinterest and Twitter.


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Free College Prep and Essay Writing Program April 3 in Ridgefield

Join me for a free College Prep and Essay Writing Program April 3 at Ridgefield Parks and Recreation. I’ll be joined by Jennifer Soodek, college admissions specialist and owner of Head4Success College Counseling.

Jennifer will give an overview of the college admissions process and I’ll teach you and your student what colleges look for in college application essays, and how to write essays that stand out.

If you need a bribe, we’re bringing cookies.

This program is from 7-9 pm and is for high school students and their families. Register through Ridgefield Parks and Recreation: 203-431-2755. I hope to see you there!

Free College Prep Night April 3 2014

sharon-epstein-college-essay-writing-and-interview-skillsSharon Epstein is owner of First Impressions College Consulting.A Writers Guild Award-winner and two-time Emmy Award nominee, Sharon teaches students how to master interview skills, write killer resumes, and transform goals, dreams and experiences into memorable college application essays. She works with students everywhere: in-person, by phone, Skype and email. Visit her website for more information. Connect on Google+, Pinterest and Twitter.

 


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How to Talk to a Rep at a College Fair

How to talk to a rep at a college fair
If you read my last post you know how to attend a college fair.

But what do you say when you talk to a rep? Do you need to make a good impression? (Yes.)  How do you get your questions answered? (Read on.)

Here are 8 Tips for Talking to a Rep at a College Fair:

1. Introduce yourself.

  • Smile, hold out your hand, and say, “Hi, I’m _______. It’s nice to meet you.” 

2. Use this as an opportunity to develop a relationship. Colleges often give preference to students who have shown an interest in attending. The college lingo for this is “demonstrated interest.” Students can demonstrate interest in many ways, such as when they visit, take a tour, talk to a professor, attend a college fair, or get to know their college rep.

  • If you’re interested in the school, get the rep’s contact information. You can contact him or her later in the process if you have questions. It’s also possible that you’ll meet the rep at another college fair or when you visit the college, in which case you want to make sure to say hi. Developing a relationship can give you an edge when you apply, because the school will know you’re really interested.

3. Have questions ready.

  • Jot down a few questions before you go to the fair.
  • Create your questions from these categories: academics, admissions, financial aid, and housing.
  • Ask your most important questions first. If there’s a line behind you, you may not be able to ask all the questions on your list. (You can always get in touch after the fair, or come back to the table when the crowds thin out.)

4. Use these questions to jump-start your list:

  • What are your admissions requirements?
  • Do you offer early decision?
  • Do you accept advanced placement courses?
  • What is the average high school GPA of the entering class?
  • What are some of your strongest academic programs?
  • Do you offer the major(s) I’m interested in?
  • What are the most popular majors?
  • Is there an honors program? What are the requirements?
  • How many undergraduates attend  your school?
  • What is the student to faculty ratio?
  • Do professors teach undergraduates or will I have mostly teaching assistants?
  • Are faculty members easy to reach outside of class?
  • What is the total cost of attending your school for a year?
  • What kinds of scholarships are available?
  • What kind of financial aid is available?
  • What is the average financial loan package?
  • How many students receive financial aid?
  • What sports or other events are popular on campus?
  • Are there fraternities and sororities? How strong are they?
  • Is housing guaranteed? For how long?
  • What do students do in their free time?
  • What percentage of your students graduate in four years?
  • How are roommates selected?
  • What kind of support do you offer for students with special needs?

5. Don’t wait on long lines. Skip the most crowded tables. Make a note on your map to come back later, when the lines are shorter.

6. Don’t hog the rep. This tip comes from Matthew Dempsey, who is a college admissions officer at Fairfield University. Matthew says he loves answering questions, but he has a limited time to meet and talk to people at college fairs. So if you (or your family) have a lot of questions and there’s a line behind you, say hello but come back later in the fair when the rep isn’t as busy and will have more time for you.

7. Let your parents listen. Parents will often have follow-up questions for the rep, especially about financial aid.

8. Say thank you. Make a point to end the way you began: smile, shake hands, and say thank you. You’ll make a great – and memorable – impression.

Read my related post:
How to Visit a College Fair

Print out an excellent one-page list of questions:
Questions to Ask a Representative (From Montana State University)

sharon-epstein-college-essay-writing-and-interview-skillsSharon Epstein is owner of First Impressions College Consulting. A Writers Guild Award-winner and two-time Emmy Award nominee, Sharon teaches students how to master interview skills, write killer resumes, and transform goals, dreams and experiences into memorable college application essays. She works with students everywhere: in-person, by phone, Skype and email. Visit her website for more information. Connect on Google+, Pinterest and Twitter.


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How to Visit a College Fair

how to visit a college fair Have you added a college fair to your calendar? Great! You’ll meet college reps, find answers to your questions, and learn about the schools that interest you.

But be careful – college fairs can be overwhelming, especially if you plunge in without a plan.

Here’s How to Visit a College Fair:

1. Locate a College Fair in Your Area.

The biggest organizer of college fairs is the National Association for College Admission Counseling (NACAC). You’ll find a complete list of college fairs on their website. They also organize Performing and Visual Arts College Fairs.

You can register beforehand for a NACAC fair, which will save time and standing on line.

High schools organize college fairs, too. Every year you’ll find me at the Danbury College & Vocational Fair in Danbury, Connecticut, where I love meeting and talking to students about writing college application essays. (Come see me!)

2. Before You Go to the Fair:

  •  Make a list of the colleges you want to visit. The schools should meet your criteria (academics, extracurriculars, location, size, etc.).
  • Take a notebook and a pen or pencil.
  • Take a bag or backpack to stash the information you’ll collect.
  • If you have access to a computer, print address labels with your name and address to stick on all the requests for information you’ll want to fill out (a time-saver!).
  • Dress decently. You may be meeting the college admissions officer from the school of your dreams.
  • Write down questions for the college reps. Here are a few possible questions:
    • What are the most popular majors at your school?
    • Do you offer the sports or extra curricular activities I’m interested in?
    • What kind of career services do you offer your students?
    • How available are the instructors to the students?
    • Do the best professors teach undergraduates?
    • How many students receive financial aid?
    • NACAC offers a complete list of questions to print out. Find it here.

3. When You Arrive:

  • Pick up a Map. Mark off the colleges that you want to see and lay out a path. That way, you won’t miss any schools or have to backtrack to find them, which will save a ton of energy.
  • Talk to at Least One School Not on Your List. Don’t just look at the schools you think you’ll like or the ones your friends want to attend. If a school seems interesting, say hi. You’ve got reps from colleges across the country at your disposal.
  • Don’t Rely on Memory. After you finish at each table, jot down the answers and your impressions so you can compare schools later. Everything blends together at these events—no matter how great your memory is.

4. For Bonus Points:

  • Bring Your Parents. Really. I’m not saying that Mom and Dad should stand two inches away while you talk to the rep—this is your fair. But parents are another set of eyes and ears, which is helpful when there’s so much information to absorb. They can also get answers to their own questions, like financial aid. Afterwards, make plans as a family to grab a burger and discuss your impressions—it will help you sort out your thoughts.

5. When You Get Home:

  • Organize your materials so you can find them when you need them.

Next Time: How to Talk to a Rep at a College Fair (and make a great impression while you do).

sharon-epstein-college-essay-writing-and-interview-skillsSharon Epstein is owner of First Impressions College Consulting. A Writers Guild Award-winner and two-time Emmy Award nominee, Sharon teaches students how to master interview skills, write killer resumes, and transform goals, dreams and experiences into memorable college application essays. She works with students everywhere: in-person, by phone, Skype and email. Visit her website for more information. Connect on Google+, Pinterest and Twitter.

 

helpful links:
NACAC: Tips for Attending a College Fair
NACAC: What to Do at a Performing Arts Fair
Danbury College & Vocational Fair


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2014 Spring College Fairs

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Looking for a college fair in your area?

Here is the list of  spring 2014 national college fairs sponsored by National Association for College Admission Counseling.  For more information about each fair, click on the name of the college fair or visit National College Fairs.

MARCH 2
Louisville National College Fair
Kentucky International Convention Center
Louisville, KY
2:00 p.m. – 5:00 p.m.

MARCH 9
The Park Expo and Conference Center
Charlotte, NC
12:00 p.m. – 4:00 p.m.
MARCH 11
Raleigh Convention Center
Raleigh, NC
4:30 p.m. – 7:30 p.m.

MARCH 16
Atlanta National College Fair
Georgia World Congress Center
Atlanta, GA
12:00 p.m. – 4:00 p.m.

MARCH 16 & 17
Rochester Riverside Convention Center
Rochester, New York
March 16: 1:00 p.m. – 3:30 p.m.
March 17: 9:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m.
MARCH 18
Syracuse National College Fair
SRC Arena
Onondaga Community College
Syracuse, New York
9:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m. and 5:00 p.m. – 8 p.m.
MARCH 30 & MARCH 31
Eastern States Exposition (The Big E)
West Springfield, Massachusetts
March 30: 1:00 p.m. – 4:00 p.m.
March 31: 9:00 a.m. – 11:30 a.m.

MARCH 31 & APRIL 1
Metro Detroit National College Fair
Suburban Collection Showplace
Novi, Michigan
March 31: 6:00 p.m. – 8:00 p.m.
April 1: 8:30 a.m. – 12:00 p.m.
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Grand Rapids, Michigan
8:30 a.m. – 11:30 a.m. and 6:00 p.m.–8:00 p.m.

APRIL 3 & 4
Hartford National College Fair
Connecticut Convention Center
Hartford, Connecticut
Thursday, April 3: 9:00 a.m. – 11:30 a.m., 6:30 p.m. – 8:30 p.m.
Friday, April 4: 9:00 a.m. – 11:30 a.m.


APRIL 5
Columbus National College Fair
Greater Columbus Convention Center
Columbus, Ohio
1:00 p.m. – 4 p.m.

APRIL 6
Cleveland National College Fair

Wolstein Center
Cleveland, Ohio
1:00 p.m. – 4:00 p.m.

APRIL 6
New York National College Fair
Jacob K. Javits Convention Center of New York
New York, NY
11:00 a.m. – 4:00 p.m.

APRIL 8 & 9
Buffalo Niagara Convention Center
Buffalo, NY
April 8: 9:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m. and 6:00 p.m. – 8:30 p.m.
April 9: 9:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m.

APRIL 9 & 10
Montgomery County National College Fair

Montgomery County Agricultural Center
Gaithersburg, MD
April 9: 9:45 a.m. – 12:45 p.m. and 6:30 p.m. – 8:30 p.m.
April 10: 9:45 a.m. – 12:30 p.m.

APRIL 10

Honolulu National College Fair
Hawaii Convention Center
Honolulu, HI
8:30 a.m. – 11:30 a.m. and 5:00 p.m. – 8:00 p.m.


APRIL 11
Prince George’s County National College Fair

Prince George’s Sports and Learning Complex
Landover, Maryland
9:30 a.m. – 1:30 p.m.

APRIL 23
San Diego National College Fair
San Diego Convention Center
San Diego, CA
9:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m. and 6:00 p.m. – 8:30 p.m.

APRIL 23 & 24
New Jersey National College Fair

Meadowlands Exposition Center (at Harmon Meadow)
Secaucus, NJ
April 23: 9:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m. and 6:00 p.m. – 9:00 p.m.
April 24: 9:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m.

APRIL 24
Ventura/Tri-County National College Fair

Ventura County Fairgrounds
Ventura, CA
5:30 p.m.–8:30 p.m

APRIL 26
Providence National College Fair

Rhode Island Convention Center
Providence, RI
12:00 p.m. – 3:00 p.m.

APRIL 27
Nashville National College Fair
Music City Center

Nashville, TN
1:00 p.m. – 4:00 p.m.

Anaheim Convention Center
Anaheim, CA
1:30 p.m. – 4:30 p.m.

APRIL 29
Ontario Convention Center
Ontario, CA
9:00 a.m.–12:00 p.m. and 6:00 p.m.–8:00 p.m.

MAY 1
Greater Los Angeles National College Fair
Pasadena Convention Center
Pasadena, CA
9:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m. and 6:00 p.m. – 9:00 p.m.

MAY 1 & 2
Boston National College Fair
Boston Convention & Exhibition Center (BCEC)
Boston, MA
May 1: 9:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m. and 6:00 p.m. – 8:30 p.m.
May 2: 9:00 a.m. – 12:00 p.m.

Cow Palace
San Francisco, CA
1:30 p.m.–4:30 p.m.
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sharon-epstein-college-essay-writing-and-interview-skillsSharon Epstein is owner of First Impressions College Consulting. A Writers Guild Award-winner and two-time Emmy Award nominee, Sharon teaches students how to master interview skills, write killer resumes, and transform goals, dreams and experiences into memorable college application essays. She works with students everywhere: in-person, by phone, Skype and email. Visit her website for more information. Connect on Google+, Pinterest and Twitter.


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2014-2015 Common Application Essay Prompts

2014-2015 Common Application essay prompts

The news is in!

The Common Application just announced that The Common Application essay prompts for 2014-15 will be the same as last year.

The essay length will continue to be capped at 650 words.

Last year, nearly 70 percent of Common Application member colleges and 90 percent of school counselors said that the prompts were effective in helping students represent themselves to colleges. So they’re doing it again.

That’s good news. Last year my students wrote terrific essays using these prompts. And in the coming weeks, I’ll be sharing what I learned, and writing about how students can answer them.  I have lots of ideas to pass along.

In the meantime, here is the list:

The 2014-2015 Common Application Essay Prompts:

  • Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
  • Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure.  How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?
  • Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea.  What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?
  • Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content.  What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?
  • Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.

sharon-epstein-college-essay-writing-and-interview-skillsSharon Epstein is owner of First Impressions College Consulting in Redding, Connecticut. A Writers Guild Award-winner and two-time Emmy Award nominee, Sharon lectures extensively on essay writing. Sharon teaches students how to master interview skills, write killer resumes, and transform goals, dreams and experiences into memorable college application essays. She works with students everywhere: in-person, by phone, Skype and email. Visit her website for more info. Connect on Google+, Pinterest and Twitter.